The FORCE

The Vow

LL Cool J

Lyrics & Rhyme Analysis

17

End

194

Internal

94

Multi

248

Slant

3

Chain

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[Verse 2: Mad Squablz]
Uh, to fuck with me, you need your ammo✦ up
Proceed to stand on punks, you know the schemes will leave your flannel scuffed
Peep the handle, son, know my procedure be to damage✦ stuff
No Madden✦ franchise, but this my season,✦ we just havin'✦ fun
Uh, cash rules✦ everythin' I hate and love
Niggas✦ hate to face reality, that's why we takin'✦ drugs
Payin' plugs, but there will come a time when it just ain't enough✦
You might just turn to Cobain✦ if you ain't as tough
I might emerge✦ with propane, it's a fatal stunt
Properly insert a bold claim as if I ain't the one
And now I'm rhymin'✦ with a legend✦ like I said I would
Intrinsically, I murder✦ beats just like a legend✦ should
Tried to convince 'em I was meant for this, the best I could
Niggas✦ narcoleptic, won't accept✦ I'm here to wreck for good
Feelin'✦ more intrepid, more receptive since I left the hood
Feelin'✦ more adept✦ and on your neck's where l'ma plant my foot
[Verse 3: J-S.A.N.D.]
Name a nigga✦ that flow harder✦
Flow more graphic than flow charts
Won't relax till I build up these plaques and hold tartar
Spare no targets, got a flow so nauseous
I cough up words and throw bars up
Hardly✦ a reverend, but I'm always gon' thank the Lord for the blessings
In life, I learned that takin'✦ losses✦ is a part of the lesson✦
I fathered you peasants, you niggas✦ my sons
So when I kill you motherfuckers,✦ we'll just call it postpartum depression✦
Lafayette, Louisiana, where niggas✦ be squeezin' hammers
Niggas✦ don't speak with grammar, so people gon think we bamas✦
It's frequent to keep your hands up, anybody✦ can get it
And anybody✦ can give it to you, it's like Secret✦ Santa✦
I'm sayin', you niggas✦ is nothin'✦ like me and my
You look at niggas✦ and deify,✦ we defy✦
Defeat✦ and divide,✦ reheat✦ and refry✦
Niggas✦ ain't reachin' this high, need to repeat✦ and retry✦
Bitch, I'm too different to be in any✦ competition✦ with y'all
The only✦ way I quit is if you get petitions involved
So you can place your bets, you bet against me, you gon' stay in debt
I stay the best 'cause I'm the only✦ rookie that can face the vets
You little niggas✦ never✦ raisin'✦ threats
You niggas✦ bitter✦ and y'all sweet, you motherfuckers✦ is Raisinettes
I'm layin' low and chasin'✦ checks
'Cause when I blow, I'm finna✦ run the rap game like the FitnessGram Pacer✦ Test
[Verse 4: Don Pablito]
You niggas✦ can't check me, I hope your next move don't upset✦ me
Got fresh prints on this barrel,✦ in a suit like Jeffrey✦
I get you clean through your towel,✦ had to clean up the towns
For the beef we browse, like releasin' the hounds
Had the monkey✦ on the counter with his hands on his mouth
The other✦ monkey✦ for his ears so we ain't hearin'✦ you out
The third monkey✦ had his hands over✦ his eyes
So you can get buried✦ if you imply✦
I'm outta✦ the country where two can dine, now honey,✦ you can't deny✦
The shooters come in flurries like Curry✦ and Luka✦ Don
Now say hello✦ to the motherfuckin' Don
Tip toe, don't you come across that line (Don't die)
'Cause you just one of plenty✦ niggas,✦ I ain't any✦ nigga✦
Billion✦ dollars worth of silly✦ niggas,✦ we brought Gillie with us
That separate you from your mama✦ titty,✦ nigga✦
Jump up out the Bentley,✦ nigga,✦ better✦ sit up when you see the dealer✦

Technical Breakdown

7.0
Multisyllabic Rhymes9.5

Complexity of rhyme schemes (data-driven)

Internal Rhymes9.5

Rhymes within a line (data-driven)

Wordplay / Double Entendres6.5

Clever language, metaphors, punchlines

Cadence / Rhythm5.5

Flow variation and timing (data-driven)

Vocabulary Complexity7.0

Range and depth of words used (data-driven)

Delivery / Breath Control7.0

Performance and control

Computed Score6.95

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Critic Analysis
RAPLEDGER BAROMETER™

The verse demonstrates high-level technical density and rhythmic consistency, utilizing internal rhyme chains to bridge the gap between aggressive braggadocio and introspective commentary, though it occasionally relies on standard genre tropes for thematic resolution.

B
9.5
Multisyllabic
9.5
Internal Rhymes
5.5
Cadence / Flow
7
Vocabulary
6.5
Wordplay
7
Delivery
Multisyllabic internal rhymingPhonetic wordplayContextual subversion of industry success metricsEnjambment for rhythmic drive
Rhyme Architecture: The verse relies on dense, multisyllabic internal rhyming schemes that pivot around heavy stress points, utilizing a mix of AAAA and AABB structures extended by internal line breaks.
Verified Doubles & Entendres

"No Madden franchise, but this my season"

① A reference to the popular Madden NFL video game series.② A declaration that despite lacking corporate backing or commercial 'franchise' status, the artist is dominating their current creative cycle.

"Won't relax till I build up these plaques and hold tartar"

① Accumulating RIAA music industry award plaques.② A dental metaphor suggesting the accumulation of grit and buildup (tartar) through the intense effort required to achieve industry success.

Exceptional density of internal rhymes

Strong command of cadence and pocket navigation

Clear, confident delivery with effective dynamic shifts

Coherent thematic progression within the multisyllabic constraints

Reliance on somewhat dated pop-culture references

Thematic resolution occasionally feels predictable within the 'hard rapper' archetype

Occasional trade-off of complex narrative for technical rhyme performance

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