14 Shots to the Dome

Shot Down in Cold Blood

LL Cool J

Lyrics & Rhyme Analysis

48

End

193

Internal

64

Multi

235

Slant

12

Chain

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[Chorus]
Keep on (To the break of dawn)
Yeah (To the break of dawn)
Keep on (To the break of dawn, rock that shit)
Ayo, that's kinda✦ funky,✦ but check this out here (To the break of dawn), yeah
[Verse 2]
Immaculate styles✦ I use to abuse✦ MCs
So light the fuse and spread the news, you lose
To the damager,✦ microphone✦ manager✦
Cold crush and bruise and bandage a amateur✦
That amateur✦ swingin' a hammer✦
From a body✦ bag, so run and get your camera✦
Get a flick of the stiff, dead, shot to get swift
But I'm the wrong brother✦ to dance with
'Cause I don't need a partner to swing
Keep your eyes on the Cool J ring
Shootin' the gift, but you just don't shoot it right
You couldn't bust a grape in a fruit fight
Wouldn't throw a rock in a ghost town
So don't try to play post, clown
You know that LL's back in town
And all the wanna-be sheriffs is gettin'✦ shot down
Gimme that microphone✦
I'ma✦ show you the real meaning of the danger✦ zone
Stop dancin',✦ get to walkin'✦
Shut your old mouth when young folks is talkin'✦
Huh, you little snake in the grass
You swing a hammer,✦ but you couldn't break a glass
Gimme a lighter, woof
Now you're cut loose from that Jheri✦ curl juice
Cool J is back on the map
And when I see ya, I'ma✦ give you a slap
That's right, a little kick for that crap
'Cause my old gym teacher ain't supposed to rap
[Chorus]
Keep on (To the break of dawn)
Yeah (To the break of dawn), pump it up
I said keep on (To the break of dawn, rock that shit)
Check this out (To the break of dawn), yeah
[Verse 3]
How dare you stand beside✦ me
I'm cool, I freeze I-C-E
On your trail and I'ma✦ cut that ponytail
You're disobedient with the wrong ingredients
But I'ma✦ drink you down over✦ the rocks
While the freak on your album cover✦ jocks
You're gonna✦ hear a real ill paragraph soon
I took the cover✦ right home to the bathroom
In the immortal words of LL, "Hard as hell"
Your broad wears it well
She's the reason✦ that your record sold a few copies✦
But your rhymes✦ are sloppy✦
Like Oscar,✦ and you're bound to get dropped✦
And stopped,✦ I ain't Murray✦ the cop
Nor am I Felix,✦ but I got a bag of tricks
Mr. Pusherman, gimme a fix
So I can show you I'm immune✦ to them romper✦ room tunes✦
You little hip-hop✦ raccoon
I'm not Scarface, but I want more beef
Before✦ you rapped,✦ you was a downtown car thief
Workin'✦ in a parking lot
A brother✦ with a perm deserves to get burned✦
So tell me how you like your cold cream
On a cone, in a bowl or in a wet dream?
With your TV on channel fuzz
Uncle L, that's how much damage✦ he does
Here's✦ five dollars, catch a taxi✦ cab
Take your rhymes✦ around✦ the corner✦ to the rap rehab✦
[Chorus]
Keep on (To the break of dawn)
Yeah (To the break of dawn)
I said keep on (To the break of dawn)
[Outro]
Just wanted✦ to funk it up a little bit
My man Pete Rock just walked✦ up in the crib, you know what I'm sayin'?
Over✦ here at Marley✦ Marl house just coolin'✦ out, my man Clash in the house
Sippin'✦ on this Bartles & Jaymes✦ premium peach-flavored wine cooler✦
Loungin' back, keep on
Peace
Yeah, that's funky✦

Technical Breakdown

8.7
Multisyllabic Rhymes7.5

Complexity of rhyme schemes (data-driven)

Internal Rhymes9.5

Rhymes within a line (data-driven)

Wordplay / Double Entendres6.5

Clever language, metaphors, punchlines

Cadence / Rhythm10.0

Flow variation and timing (data-driven)

Vocabulary Complexity7.0

Range and depth of words used (data-driven)

Delivery / Breath Control8.5

Performance and control

Computed Score8.65

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Critic Analysis
RAPLEDGER BAROMETER™

LL Cool J utilizes a high-octane, aggressive cadence that serves as a masterclass in 90s-era battle rap posturing, balancing internal rhythm with iconic, though occasionally dated, hyperbolic threats.

A
7.5
Multisyllabic
9.5
Internal Rhymes
10
Cadence / Flow
7
Vocabulary
6.5
Wordplay
8.5
Delivery
Internal rhyme stackingMultisyllabic chain-linkingRhythmic syncopationAggressive persona projection
Rhyme Architecture: The verse relies on a dense AAAA-style multi-syllabic foundation (e.g., manager/bandage a amateur/hammer/camera) that keeps a consistent, rapid-fire forward momentum.
Verified Doubles & Entendres

"You couldn't bust a grape in a fruit fight"

① A literal description of a pathetic opponent unable to perform a simple task② A metaphor for the opponent's total lack of physical or lyrical impact in a violent confrontation

"Shootin' the gift"

① A play on the phrase 'shooting the gift' as in rhyming or rapping② A double entendre referencing actual firearm violence consistent with the song's 'cold blood' theme

Excellent rhythmic pocket and internal rhyme density

Confident, high-energy delivery that dictates the track's intensity

Effective use of multi-syllabic patterns to drive the flow

Imagery relies on classic battle-rap tropes that feel slightly derivative

Some punchlines rely on hyperbole that borders on the cartoonish

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