I Am Not a Human Being II

Am I Wrong

Lil Wayne

Lyrics & Rhyme Analysis

10

End

87

Internal

35

Multi

92

Slant

6

Chain

Rhyme Groups — hover to spotlight
I'm still fly like a phantom✦ in God's eye
You niggas✦ gotta✦ try like a Cannon✦
My nigga✦ I go hard like a cannon✦
I still kill bars like a cannon✦
I'm still fly like a phantom✦ in God's eye
You niggas✦ gotta✦ try like a Cannon✦
My nigga✦ I go hard like a cannon✦
I still kill bars like a cannon✦
Look, I wake up With a cloud on my eye
I been flying all night I didn't see the sunrise
I'm on, this rapping shit better✦ than you ever✦ could
I mean Bars so hard like a ladder✦ should
I mean bars so hard they can fuck a crock
I mean bars so hard they can fuck your lady✦
I mean bars so hard they can make a baby✦
I mean bars so hard they even✦ tempt me
Okay✦ okay,✦ I'm in a conversation✦
Talking to myself✦ with concentration✦
Listening to myself✦ without the patience✦
I got the period✦ to myself,✦ ovulation✦
Yoh, am I the crazy✦ one
God made rappers, now who's this lazy✦ one
And I thought real rap is dead since everybody is doing
Trap music when it's dead
It's not a diss song, I wish it was but not this long
I don't need words in my songs
I could kill the crowd with silence✦ am I wrong
What.. You don't believe me
Okay✦ okay,✦ let's make an eg
Now bring it back
I been wanting to do this for a long time
Since I was a little boy, (now who the fuck would I be)
Since I was a little pikinini (now who the fuck would I be)

Technical Breakdown

7.0
Multisyllabic Rhymes8.5

Complexity of rhyme schemes (data-driven)

Internal Rhymes9.5

Rhymes within a line (data-driven)

Wordplay / Double Entendres4.5

Clever language, metaphors, punchlines

Cadence / Rhythm7.5

Flow variation and timing (data-driven)

Vocabulary Complexity6.0

Range and depth of words used (data-driven)

Delivery / Breath Control6.0

Performance and control

Computed Score6.98

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Critic Analysis
RAPLEDGER BAROMETER™

The verse relies heavily on repetitive, simplistic rhyme structures and inconsistent, 'stream-of-consciousness' wordplay that lacks the depth of typical elite Wayne output.

B
8.5
Multisyllabic
9.5
Internal Rhymes
7.5
Cadence / Flow
6
Vocabulary
4.5
Wordplay
6
Delivery
Repetitive phonetic iterationAnaphoric structureStream of consciousness flowInternal monorhyme clusters
Rhyme Architecture: Highly repetitive, focusing on identical end-rhymes ('cannon' cluster) and forced internal rhymes in the latter half, utilizing a loose AAAA structure that eventually devolves into free-associative lines.
Verified Doubles & Entendres

"I got the period to myself, ovulation"

① A metaphorical claim of owning a specific timeframe or cycle of dominance.② A biological reference to the female reproductive cycle, used to extend the 'period' pun.

"Bars so hard like a ladder should"

① A claim that his lyrics possess physical rigidity.② A forced comparison intended to rhyme with the previous line, lacking a logical semantic connection to 'hard'.

Consistent, energetic vocal performance

High density of internal rhyming

Strong command of flow and cadence

Excessive repetition of 'cannon' weakens impact

Lack of structural cohesion in the second half

Weak, nonsensical metaphorical links regarding 'bars' and 'crock'

Over-reliance on elementary 'I mean' connectors

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