Donda

Ok Ok pt 2

Kanye West

Lyrics & Rhyme Analysis

10

End

79

Internal

22

Multi

91

Slant

6

Chain

Rhyme Groups — hover to spotlight
[Verse 3: Rooga]
Yeah, it's been plenty✦ times you closed✦ the door on me
That **** really✦ show me how much you say you a bro to me
Showed✦ you love and you constantly cold-shouldered me
But ain't no goin' back to fixin'✦ up, that's the older me, yeah
I'm done with all the fake ****, I had enough✦ of that, yeah
I done had too many✦ **** stab me in the back (Yeah, yeah, yeah)
They say they with you, but they really✦ puttin'✦ on an act
That's when **** hit the fan and all of a sudden,✦ all the facts show
You gotta✦ chin up and show a **** tough love
Let 'em go without you just to show 'em what it was
We was so close, you would've thought we was blood
We got the same pain, we come from the mud
I swear this **** make me wanna✦ put my all in it, yeah
You can hear the pain 'cause I put my heart in it, yeah
Most of these **** ain't real, they don't wanna✦ see me winnin',✦ no
Most of these **** ain't real, they don't wanna✦ see me winnin',✦ no
[Outro: Kanye West & Rooga]
But it's okay,✦ we gon' be okay✦
Only✦ show up when we cut the cake (Oh, yeah)
Showin'✦ love, but we okay✦ (We okay)✦
Find God 'fore it's too late

Technical Breakdown

7.3
Multisyllabic Rhymes8.5

Complexity of rhyme schemes (data-driven)

Internal Rhymes9.5

Rhymes within a line (data-driven)

Wordplay / Double Entendres5.0

Clever language, metaphors, punchlines

Cadence / Rhythm8.0

Flow variation and timing (data-driven)

Vocabulary Complexity6.0

Range and depth of words used (data-driven)

Delivery / Breath Control6.5

Performance and control

Computed Score7.32

Production

— Kanye West, Boi-1da, Louis Bell, Fya Man

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Critic Analysis
RAPLEDGER BAROMETER™

The verse relies on raw emotional transparency and a consistent, rhythmic delivery rather than complex lyrical abstraction. It succeeds in establishing a somber, grounded atmosphere that complements the production, though it lacks significant metaphorical depth.

B+
8.5
Multisyllabic
9.5
Internal Rhymes
8
Cadence / Flow
6
Vocabulary
5
Wordplay
6.5
Delivery
AABB rhyme scheme architectureEnd-rhyme consistencyEmotional cadence modulationConversational flow
Rhyme Architecture: The verse employs a largely AABB rhyme scheme with heavy reliance on multi-syllabic end-rhymes (e.g., 'door on me', 'bro to me', 'shouldered me', 'older me'). The structure is linear and narrative-driven, favoring a direct, confessional tone.
Verified Doubles & Entendres

"they really puttin' on an act"

① The individuals are feigning loyalty or friendship.② A direct theatrical metaphor, comparing their deceptive behavior to a stage performance.

"we come from the mud"

① Shared origin from impoverished or difficult socioeconomic backgrounds.② A figurative representation of the 'dirty' or messy nature of their collective trauma and struggle.

Strong emotional resonance and authenticity

High level of rhythmic consistency and flow

Effective use of repetitive structures to build tension

Lack of complex figurative language or layered double entendres

High reliance on common hip-hop vernacular and tropes regarding betrayal

Limited variation in thematic content

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