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Murder to Excellence

Kanye West

Lyrics & Rhyme Analysis

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End

134

Internal

81

Multi

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Slant

11

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[Chorus: Kanye West]
The paper✦ read, "Murder,✦ Black-on-Black✦ murder"✦
The paper✦ read, "Murder,✦ Black-on-Black✦ murder"✦ again✦
"Murder"✦ again✦
[Verse 3: Kanye West]
Is it genocide?✦
'Cause I can still hear his mama✦ cries
Know the family✦ traumatized✦
Shots left holes✦ in his face about✦ piranha-sized✦
The old pastor✦ closed✦ the cold casket✦
And said the church ain't got enough✦ room for all the tombs
It's a war going on outside✦ we ain't safe from
I feel the pain in my city✦ wherever✦ I go
314 soldiers died in Iraq, 509 died in Chicago
[Verse 4: Jay Z]
I arrived on the day Fred Hampton died, uh
Real niggas✦ just multiply
And they say by 21, I was supposed to die
So I'm out here celebrating my post-demise
If you put crabs in a barrel✦ to ensure✦ your survival
You gon' end up pulling down niggas✦ that look just like you
What up, Blood? Uh, what up, cuz? Uh, it's all Black, uh, I love us
[Chorus: Kanye West]
The paper✦ read, "Murder,✦ Black-on-Black✦ murder"✦
The paper✦ read, "Murder,✦ Black-on-Black✦ murder"✦ again✦
"Black-on-Black✦ murder"✦ again✦
"Black-on-Black✦ murder"✦ again✦
[Part II: Excellence]
[Intro: Jay Z]
It's a celebration✦ of Black excellence,✦ black tie, black Maybachs
Huh, yeah, uh
[Verse 1: Jay Z]
Black excellence,✦ opulence,✦ decadence✦
Tuxes✦ next to the president, I'm present
I dress in Dries, and other✦ boutique stores✦ in Paris✦
In sheepskin coats, I silence✦ the lambs
Do you know who I am, Clarice?
No cheap cologne whenever✦ I "shh-shh"
Success✦ never✦ smelled so sweet
I stink of success,✦ the new Black elite✦
They say my Black Card bear the mark of the beast
I repeat,✦ my religion✦ is the beat
My verse is like church, my Jesus✦ piece
Now please, domino,✦ domino✦
Only✦ spot a few Blacks the higher✦ I go, uh
What's up to Will? Uh, shout out to O, uh
That ain't enough,✦ we gonna✦ need a million✦ more, uh
Kick in the door, uh, Biggie flow
I'm all dressed up with nowhere✦ to go, uh
[Verse 2: Kanye West]
Yeah, it's all messed✦ up when it's nowhere✦ to go
So we won't take the time out 'til we reach the T-O-P
From parolees that hold G's, sold keys, low keys
We like the promised land of the OG's
In the past if you picture events like a black tie
What the last thing you expect to see? Black guys
What's the life expectancy for Black guys?
The system's working effectively, that's why
I'll be a real man, take care of your son
Every✦ problem you had before✦ this day is now done
New crib, watch a movie
'Cause there ain't nothin'✦ on the news but the blues
Hit the mall, pick up some Gucci
Now ain't nothing new but your shoes
Sunday✦ morning, praise the Lord
You the girl that Jesus✦ had been saving✦ me for
So let's savor✦ this moment and take it to the floor
Black excellence,✦ truly✦ yours

Technical Breakdown

8.5
Multisyllabic Rhymes9.5

Complexity of rhyme schemes (data-driven)

Internal Rhymes9.5

Rhymes within a line (data-driven)

Wordplay / Double Entendres8.0

Clever language, metaphors, punchlines

Cadence / Rhythm8.5

Flow variation and timing (data-driven)

Vocabulary Complexity7.0

Range and depth of words used (data-driven)

Delivery / Breath Control8.5

Performance and control

Computed Score8.50

Production

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Critic Analysis
RAPLEDGER BAROMETER™

The verse utilizes stark juxtapositions between statistical realities and personal grief, leveraging Jay-Z's narrative of survival against Kanye's mournful setting to highlight the cycle of institutional and communal violence.

A
9.5
Multisyllabic
9.5
Internal Rhymes
8.5
Cadence / Flow
7
Vocabulary
8
Wordplay
8.5
Delivery
Statistical juxtapositionInternal rhyme chainsAuditory imageryMetaphorical social commentary
Rhyme Architecture: The verse employs dense internal multisyllabic rhymes (e.g., 'pastor/casket/casket') paired with powerful end-rhymes, moving from narrative imagery in Kanye's verse to rhythmic, declarative statement-making in Jay-Z's verse.
Verified Doubles & Entendres

"post-demise"

① Living life after the age he was 'supposed' to die.② A play on the concept of 'post-game' or 'post-mortem', implying he is already a ghost of his former statistical fate.

"crabs in a barrel"

① A literal description of the competitive, self-destructive nature of trapped shellfish.② A metaphor for the Black community being stifled by systemic traps that force individuals to pull each other down to survive.

"piranha-sized"

① Refers to the physical scale of the bullet holes.② Evokes the 'devouring' nature of street violence, suggesting the city itself consumes its inhabitants.

High emotional resonance through stark, visual descriptions of urban violence.

Effective use of data-driven lyricism to contextualize individual loss.

Jay-Z’s masterful flow shift, transitioning from historical allusion to street-level philosophy.

The heavy reliance on specific regional statistics may slightly alienate listeners unfamiliar with the 2011 context of the Chicago vs. Iraq comparison.

Kanye's verse relies more on emotive storytelling than high-level wordplay, making it less dense than the closing segment.

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