Diamonds from Sierra Leone (Remix)
Kanye West
Lyrics & Rhyme Analysis
9
End
84
Internal
63
Multi
168
Slant
2
Chain
Technical Breakdown
Complexity of rhyme schemes (data-driven)
Rhymes within a line (data-driven)
Clever language, metaphors, punchlines
Flow variation and timing (data-driven)
Range and depth of words used (data-driven)
Performance and control
Production
— Kanye West, Jon Brion, Devo SpringsteenBe the first to rate the production
The verse functions as a masterclass in narrative management, utilizing high-level internal rhyme density and metaphorical subtext to solidify Jay-Z's position as the 'Rock of Gibraltar' amid public scrutiny.
"I had to get off the boat so I could walk on water"
"How could you falter when you're the Rock of Gibraltar?"
Superior command of cadence and pocket
Effective synthesis of personal narrative and legendary status
High-density rhyme scheme that feels conversational rather than forced
Slightly predictable rhyme endings within the initial 'ack' sequence
Short verse length limits depth of thematic exploration