Vultures 2

My Soul

Kanye West

Lyrics & Rhyme Analysis

9

End

83

Internal

25

Multi

103

Slant

4

Chain

Rhyme Groups — hover to spotlight
[Interlude: Big TC]
Ah-ah,✦ ah-ah,✦ ah-ah✦
I know, I know
Ah-ah,✦ oh, no, no, no, no, no
[Verse 3: Big TC]
The struggle is real, gotta✦ face it
My freedom so close, I can taste it
Make money,✦ got bills, so I chase it
But stay on my Deen, 'cause without it, I'm faithless
They promise they with you, they lies
They just want what you got and they try
All alone✦ with nobody✦ beside✦
Sit there and cry, just wishin'✦ you'd die
Know this life is a test, tryna✦ pass it
With my face on the ground in the Masjid
You got questions, then you better✦ ask 'em
'Cause time wait for no one, it comes✦ and it passes✦
Under✦ pressure, attack on me daily✦
Love my mama,✦ she tried, couldn't save me
Gave me tools to survive through this crazy✦
Fear nothing but God, and be good to your lady✦
Wait on tears and no one understands
It's predestined and God got a plan
One thing I know, he made me a man
He gave me two legs on the ground on to stand
To my wifey,✦ baby,✦ you so fine
Proud to say to the world, yeah, you mine
You stood by me through all the hard times✦
You pushed✦ the line, you pushed✦ the line
I, I can feel your light up on me
Keep shinin'✦ your light up on me
Shine your light, just shine up on me
I can feel your light, oh

Technical Breakdown

6.9
Multisyllabic Rhymes7.5

Complexity of rhyme schemes (data-driven)

Internal Rhymes9.5

Rhymes within a line (data-driven)

Wordplay / Double Entendres5.0

Clever language, metaphors, punchlines

Cadence / Rhythm6.5

Flow variation and timing (data-driven)

Vocabulary Complexity7.0

Range and depth of words used (data-driven)

Delivery / Breath Control7.0

Performance and control

Computed Score6.93

Production

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Critic Analysis
RAPLEDGER BAROMETER™

The verse utilizes consistent thematic sincerity and rhythmic grounding to convey emotional weight, though it lacks complex lyrical subversion or multi-layered wordplay.

B
7.5
Multisyllabic
9.5
Internal Rhymes
6.5
Cadence / Flow
7
Vocabulary
5
Wordplay
7
Delivery
AABB rhyme structurethematic consistencyrhythmic cadence stabilityinternal rhyme chaining
Rhyme Architecture: Predominantly AABB couplets with consistent monorhyme endings in each section, relying on 'a-it' and 'i-e' vowel sounds to maintain a driving, narrative-focused cadence.
Verified Doubles & Entendres

"stay on my Deen"

① Adhering to the Islamic path/faith② A play on 'being' (staying true to oneself/existence) while maintaining religious commitment

"time wait for no one, it comes and it passes"

① The literal progression of time② The state of being incarcerated (time 'passing' as in serving a sentence)

Strong emotional resonance and narrative clarity

Effective use of internal rhymes to propel the rhythm

Coherent thematic arc from personal struggle to spiritual surrender

Lack of complex metaphors or high-level wordplay

Relies heavily on standard rhyme patterns

Limited variation in flow and cadence

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