Presence

Presence

Styles P

Lyrics & Rhyme Analysis

23

End

125

Internal

69

Multi

185

Slant

13

Chain

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[Chorus]
Stop what you're doing ‘cause I'm about✦ to ruin
The image✦ and the style that you're used✦ to
You see we droppin'✦ that strong shit, more powerful✦ and dominant✦
So just respect✦ my conglomerate✦
[Verse 3: Fabolous]
With success comes✦ stress if it's my grind
So I light up every✦ night nigga,✦ skyline✦
I keep gettin'✦ better,✦ they should call me fine wine
While these used-to-bes wish they filled✦ with my time
But nah, it is what it fuckin'✦ is
And goin' hard is just a part of the fuckin'✦ biz
No porno,✦ right now I'm in the Bordeaux
We usually in a pair of "damn I never✦ saw those"
Glass of pink for everybody✦
They say stay hungry✦ and never✦ thirsty
So I'm buyin' drinks for everybody✦
Problem✦ is that I can't link with everbody✦
And nowadays everybody✦ think they everybody✦
You think you Big Meech? No you don't
Bring the strip club to the house? No you won't
And I'd invite✦ you to the top but I'm sure
It's for real niggas✦ and you'd get stopped at the door
[Chorus]
Stop what you're doing ‘cause I'm about✦ to ruin
The image✦ and the style that you're used✦ to
You see we droppin'✦ that strong shit, more powerful✦ and dominant✦
So just respect✦ my conglomerate✦
[Verse 4: Jadakiss & Styles P]
Yeah, a real nigga✦ never✦ worry✦ bout what a coward✦ do
Time is money✦
So I respect✦ what an hour do
One phone call
And the posse'll shower✦ you
You know my regime✦ is much more powerful✦
Same plans of course
Every✦ gram is nos
Get charged to the game cause every✦ man's a boss
Respect✦ my conglomerate,✦ nigga✦
Cash in the stash and the mask
My connect is anonymous
You don't wanna✦ problem✦ with
Niggas✦ that get your momma✦ hit
No death where the flesh rule
Nigga✦ I'm the shit no restroom
No room to rest
Them niggas'll test you
See where it gets you
Baptize these rap guys, the gat flies
Cocaine✦ crack pies, big niggas✦ get half size
When the sword hits the waist or the four hits the face
He gone need a prayer, put the call into✦ Ma$e
I put it all in the coke
Put it all in the Chase
All in Wachovia
All in the H
9mms and Tec-9's, you will respect✦ mines✦
[Chorus]
Stop what you're doing ‘cause I'm about✦ to ruin
The image✦ and the style that you're used✦ to
You see we droppin'✦ that strong shit, more powerful✦ and dominant✦
So just respect✦ my conglomerate✦

Technical Breakdown

8.3
Multisyllabic Rhymes9.5

Complexity of rhyme schemes (data-driven)

Internal Rhymes9.5

Rhymes within a line (data-driven)

Wordplay / Double Entendres5.5

Clever language, metaphors, punchlines

Cadence / Rhythm10.0

Flow variation and timing (data-driven)

Vocabulary Complexity7.0

Range and depth of words used (data-driven)

Delivery / Breath Control6.5

Performance and control

Computed Score8.27

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Critic Analysis
RAPLEDGER BAROMETER™

Fabolous delivers a polished, structurally consistent verse that relies on conversational flow and status-based bravado rather than dense lyrical complexity, leaning into his characteristic smooth delivery to elevate standard punchlines.

A
9.5
Multisyllabic
9.5
Internal Rhymes
10
Cadence / Flow
7
Vocabulary
5.5
Wordplay
6.5
Delivery
Internal rhyme chainingMultisyllabic enjambmentConversational cadence variation
Rhyme Architecture: Maintains a high density of multi-syllabic end-rhymes (e.g., wine/time/biz/biz/Bordeaux/saw those) with a steady AABB/AAB structure that prioritizes internal assonance to maintain momentum.
Verified Doubles & Entendres

"they should call me fine wine"

① A reference to aging well and becoming more valuable/refined over time.② A direct comparison to premium vintage alcohol, suggesting his status is intoxicating and expensive.

"No porno, right now I'm in the Bordeaux"

① A playful pivot away from adult film themes to focus on luxury consumption.② A sonic play on words where 'porno' sounds like 'Bordeaux' (a luxury wine), emphasizing his shift from gutter topics to refined wealth.

Excellent technical flow and rhyme placement

Commanding, effortless vocal delivery

Strong structural coherence from setup to payoff

Wordplay is largely superficial/status-oriented

Lacks deep metaphorical layering

Vocabulary remains within the common genre tropes of the era

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