When I B on tha Mic
Rakim
Lyrics & Rhyme Analysis
23
End
128
Internal
55
Multi
186
Slant
9
Chain
Technical Breakdown
Complexity of rhyme schemes (data-driven)
Rhymes within a line (data-driven)
Clever language, metaphors, punchlines
Flow variation and timing (data-driven)
Range and depth of words used (data-driven)
Performance and control
Production
— DJ PremierBe the first to rate the production
Rakim utilizes rhythmic displacement and high-density internal rhyme schemes to modernize his flow, effectively transitioning from his classic steady cadence to a more percussive, syncopated delivery that mirrors the DJ's technical prowess.
"Rakim and Preemo — yo, I got what you need, bro"
"Make the record fly, undetected by the naked eye"
"DJs bags of tricks-graphic"
Exceptional rhythmic pocket and breath control
Sophisticated use of multi-syllabic end-rhymes (e.g., 'raw for sure' / 'wall to wall' / 'all of y'all')
Seamless integration of technical DJ references with lyrical performance
Strong structural arc from descriptive setup to performance climax
Vocabulary remains centered on conventional hip-hop tropes rather than complex abstraction
The narrative focus is somewhat limited to the 'DJ/MC' dynamic