The Master

When I B on tha Mic

Rakim

Lyrics & Rhyme Analysis

23

End

128

Internal

55

Multi

186

Slant

9

Chain

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[Chorus]
Hardcore!✦ Real ill niggas!✦
I'm internationally✦ known when I be on the mic
Hardcore!✦ Real ill niggas!✦
I'm internationally✦ known, yo
Hardcore!✦ Real ill niggas!✦
I'm internationally✦ known when I be on the mic
Hardcore!✦ Real ill niggas!✦
So all hail the honorable✦
[Verse 2]
How about✦ some hardcore?✦ Yeah, we like it raw for sure
Broads on the floor, wall to wall
There's more at the door, players ball to score
‘Cause this right here is for all of y'all
Rakim and Preemo✦ — yo, I got what you need, bro
You go see a show, smokin'✦ El Niño
And DJs play hits with hard bass kicks
And then they display tricks like The Matrix✦
Make the record fly, undetected by the naked✦ eye
So just feel the vibe, ‘cause your ears never lie
Nowadays, DJs bags of tricks-graphic
On some behind-the-back shit, catch it and scratch it
Blast it! This kid got his craft mastered
Hands is mad quick like he mix with magic✦
Spin it back and forth and grab it
And know just where it is—there it is!
[Chorus]
Hardcore!✦ Real ill niggas!✦
I'm internationally✦ known when I be on the mic
Hardcore!✦ Real ill niggas!✦
I'm internationally✦ known, yo
Hardcore!✦ Real ill niggas!✦
I'm internationally✦ known when I be on the mic
Hardcore!✦ Real ill niggas!✦
So all hail the honorable✦
[Verse 3]
To my elite✦ peeps with the murderous✦ mystiques
I hit the street with beats and they critique✦ for weeks
They be like, "How that kid Ra reach the peak?"
Pull out the heat and use my technique✦ to speak
It's dangerous,✦ sit calm and explain to kids
What part of the game this is in foreign languages
They hold Ra's events in different continents
Put my lyrical contents in monuments
In ghetto✦ garments, I rock a towel✦ like a pharaoh
Mind travel,✦ design✦ style like apparel
My fashions last long as a lifetime
‘Cause I can see the future✦ when the god write rhyme
They're mad ‘cause I managed to reign so long
Like their chance to get money✦ done came and gone
This is strictly for my listeners on the corners at night
And the sisters that be keepin'✦ us right, when I be on the mic
[Chorus]
Hardcore!✦ Real ill niggas!✦
I'm internationally✦ known when I be on the mic
Hardcore!✦ Real ill niggas!✦
I'm internationally✦ known, yo
Hardcore!✦ Real ill niggas!✦
I'm internationally✦ known when I be on the mic
Hardcore!✦ Real ill niggas!✦
So all hail the honorable✦

Technical Breakdown

8.6
Multisyllabic Rhymes8.5

Complexity of rhyme schemes (data-driven)

Internal Rhymes9.5

Rhymes within a line (data-driven)

Wordplay / Double Entendres7.5

Clever language, metaphors, punchlines

Cadence / Rhythm9.0

Flow variation and timing (data-driven)

Vocabulary Complexity7.0

Range and depth of words used (data-driven)

Delivery / Breath Control9.0

Performance and control

Computed Score8.64

Production

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Critic Analysis
RAPLEDGER BAROMETER™

Rakim utilizes rhythmic displacement and high-density internal rhyme schemes to modernize his flow, effectively transitioning from his classic steady cadence to a more percussive, syncopated delivery that mirrors the DJ's technical prowess.

A
8.5
Multisyllabic
9.5
Internal Rhymes
9
Cadence / Flow
7
Vocabulary
7.5
Wordplay
9
Delivery
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Rhyme Architecture: Rakim employs an AAAA-BBBB-CCCC rhyme scheme variation characterized by consistent terminal rhymes combined with dense, cascading internal vowel matching that accelerates the verse's momentum.
Verified Doubles & Entendres

"Rakim and Preemo — yo, I got what you need, bro"

① A direct reference to the collaborator DJ Premier.② A play on 'Preemo' as 'Primo' (slang for premium/high-quality cannabis or product).

"Make the record fly, undetected by the naked eye"

① Describing the physical speed and blur of the vinyl during a high-speed scratch routine.② A metaphorical reference to the technical precision that transcends superficial observation.

"DJs bags of tricks-graphic"

① A reference to the DJ's collection of techniques.② A neologism linking 'bag of tricks' to the 'graphic' visual nature of turntablism.

Exceptional rhythmic pocket and breath control

Sophisticated use of multi-syllabic end-rhymes (e.g., 'raw for sure' / 'wall to wall' / 'all of y'all')

Seamless integration of technical DJ references with lyrical performance

Strong structural arc from descriptive setup to performance climax

Vocabulary remains centered on conventional hip-hop tropes rather than complex abstraction

The narrative focus is somewhat limited to the 'DJ/MC' dynamic

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