My Beautiful Dark Twisted Fantasy
Who Will Survive in America
Kanye West
Lyrics & Rhyme Analysis
5
End
42
Internal
35
Multi
124
Slant
2
Chain
Rhyme Groups — hover to spotlight
Us living as we do upside✦ down
And the new word to have is revolution
People don't even✦ want to hear the preacher
Spill or spiel because God's whole card has been thoroughly piqued✦
And America✦ is now blood and tears instead of milk and honey✦
The youngsters who were programmed to continue
Fucking up woke up one night digging
Paul Revere✦ and Nat Turner✦ as the good guys
America✦ stripped for bed and we had not all yet closed✦ our eyes
The signs of truth were tattooed across her often✦ entered vagina✦
We learned to our amazement untold tale of scandal
Two long centuries buried✦ in the musty✦ vault
Hosed✦ down daily✦ with a gagging perfume
America✦ was a bastard, the illegitimate daughter of the mother✦ country
Whose legs were then spread around the world
And a rapist known as freedom, free-doom
Democracy, liberty, and justice were revolutionary code names✦ that preceded
The bubbling,✦ bubbling,✦ bubbling,✦ bubbling,✦ bubbling✦
In the mother✦ country's crotch
What does Webster say about soul?
All I want is a good home and a wife
And a children and some food to feed them every✦ night
After✦ all is said and done, build a new route to China✦ if they'll have you
Who will survive✦ in America?✦
Who will survive✦ in America?✦
Who will survive✦ in America?✦
Who will survive✦ in America?✦
Technical Breakdown
6.8
Multisyllabic Rhymes9.5
Complexity of rhyme schemes (data-driven)
Internal Rhymes8.5
Rhymes within a line (data-driven)
Wordplay / Double Entendres6.0
Clever language, metaphors, punchlines
Cadence / Rhythm4.5
Flow variation and timing (data-driven)
Vocabulary Complexity7.5
Range and depth of words used (data-driven)
Delivery / Breath Control5.0
Performance and control
Computed Score6.83
Production
— Kanye West, Jeff Bhasker, Ken LewisBe the first to rate the production
Critic Analysis
RAPLEDGER BAROMETER™
The verse employs deep metaphorical language to critique American ideals and history, but lacks the punch and emotional resonance needed for a higher impact.
B
9.5
Multisyllabic
8.5
Internal Rhymes
4.5
Cadence / Flow
7.5
Vocabulary
6
Wordplay
5
Delivery
AlliterationMetaphorImagery
Rhyme Architecture: Complex multisyllabic rhymes mixed with internal rhymes create a layered structure, though with less variation in cadence and end rhyme.
Strong multisyllabic rhymes
Thought-provoking imagery
Historical references
Delivery lacks emotional weight
Wordplay feels less innovative than expected
Cadence is somewhat repetitive
User Scores
Notes
A profound critique of society with intricate techniques and a powerful message.