My Beautiful Dark Twisted Fantasy

Lost in the World

Kanye West

Lyrics & Rhyme Analysis

44

End

91

Internal

27

Multi

187

Slant

13

Chain

Rhyme Groups — hover to spotlight
I'm up in the woods
I'm down on my mind
I'm building✦ a still
To slow down the time
I'm up in the woods
I'm down on my mind
I'm building✦ a still
To slow down the time
I'm up in the woods
I'm down on my mind
I'm building✦ a still
Down the time
I'm lost in the world
I'm down on my mind
I'm building✦ a city✦
And I'm down for the night, down for the night
Says she's down for the night
I'm never alone✦
Down the time
I'm lost in the world
I'm down my whole life
I'm new in the city✦
But I'm down for the night
Down for the night, down for the night
You're my devil,✦ you're my angel
You're my heaven, you're my hell
You're my now, you're my forever
You're my freedom, you're my jail
You're my lies, you're my truth
You're my war, you're my truce
You're my questions, you're my proof
You're my stress and you're my masseuse
Mama✦ say, mama✦ say, mama✦ Maku-san
Lost in this plastic life
Let's break out of this fake-ass party✦
Turn this into✦ a classic night
If we die in each other's✦ arms
Still get laid in that afterlife
If we die in each other's✦ arms
Still get laid, yeah
I'm up in the woods
(Run from the lights, run from the night)
I'm down on my mind
(Run for your life)
I'm new in the city✦
(Down for the night, down for the night)
Down for the night
I'm lost in the world
I'm down my whole life
I'm new in the city✦
But I'm down for the night
Down for the night, down for the night
Who will survive✦ in America?✦
Who will survive✦ in America?✦
Who will survive✦ in America?✦
Who will survive✦ in America?✦
I'm lost in the world
I'm down my whole life
I'm new in the city✦
Down for the night, down for the night
I'm lost in the world
I'm down my whole life
I'm new in the city✦
But I'm down for the night
Down for the night, down for the night

Technical Breakdown

7.6
Multisyllabic Rhymes6.5

Complexity of rhyme schemes (data-driven)

Internal Rhymes8.5

Rhymes within a line (data-driven)

Wordplay / Double Entendres4.5

Clever language, metaphors, punchlines

Cadence / Rhythm10.0

Flow variation and timing (data-driven)

Vocabulary Complexity4.0

Range and depth of words used (data-driven)

Delivery / Breath Control7.0

Performance and control

Computed Score7.56

Production

— Kanye West, Jeff Bhasker

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Critic Analysis
RAPLEDGER BAROMETER™

The verse prioritizes atmospheric resonance and repetitive, mantra-like cadence over complex lyrical density, effectively using linguistic minimalism to mimic the feeling of disorientation.

B+
6.5
Multisyllabic
8.5
Internal Rhymes
10
Cadence / Flow
4
Vocabulary
4.5
Wordplay
7
Delivery
AnaphoraRepetitive phrasingCyclical rhyme structureMinimalist syntax
Rhyme Architecture: Highly circular and repetitive, relying on a consistent 'i-e' sound landscape and the iterative use of 'down' and 'time' to create a hypnotic, recursive effect.
Verified Doubles & Entendres

"I'm building a still"

① The physical act of constructing an apparatus to distill spirits or process materials.② A metaphor for the effort to manufacture a sense of stillness or mental tranquility within chaos.

"I'm down for the night"

① Willingness to stay out or participate in activities during the evening hours.② A descent into a darker state of mind or a period of emotional vulnerability.

Exceptional use of repetition to build a specific mood of isolation

Strong rhythmic consistency that serves the ethereal production

Effective use of vocal layering and cadence as a structural device

Low lexical variety leads to a repetitive, almost nursery-rhyme quality

Lacks traditional lyrical wordplay or complex punchline structure

Reliance on phonetics over narrative depth

User Scores

Notes

An ethereal conclusion with thought-provoking lyrics and rich imagery.